I am the cliché driving off into the sunset
On my way to that mythical unspecified place
Where damaged and tortured souls conglomerate
You’ve seen me in many films
I’m positive I made you weep
Inspired you even, this stuff’s pretty deep
But baby, I have to tell ya
That sunset leads nowhere fast
Stay put, work it out, you can’t run from the past
Okay, so this came to me while looking at the sky this evening in the car: one joke about driving off into the sunset, a remark on how many movies have ended that way – and I came up with these modest but very cynical few lines. Don’t blame me, blame the sea and sky for inspiring such cynicism…(well, ok, you can blame me a little)
Love it. And I love the pic. (I’m not being cynical about that, either) 🙂
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I’m sure there isn’t a single cynical bone in your body *Cynical tone* 😀
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“That sunset leads nowhere fast
Stay put, work it out, you can’t run from the past”
So very true…As usual, I think this is very beautifully written. I love reading your poems ❤
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And as usual, you’re being far too kind – but I greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much 🙂
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Intense! Makes one think. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful pic and words ❤
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Excelent poem… The third stanza really resonated with me, dear Natalie. Bisous et bonne fin de semaine. Aquileana 😀
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Bisous à toi aussi et bon weekend 😀 Nathalie
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Bang on. I can’t begin to guess how many times I’ve wanted to simply run away from it all.
Your poem (beautifully written, btw) reminds me of something I read recently. Instead of whining about how much greener the grass is on the other side, start taking care of your own.
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Agreed. I’ve long suspected that, not only is the grass not greener on the other side, it may be that there are a lot of (unseen) weeds there too!
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I just have to say – I loved this! 🙂
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Thank you so much – I really appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment. It’s one of my favourites too so your words mean a lot 🙂
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