Inciting willfully, your words – sweet rose petals,
Impacting on my mind, an unstoppable flow
In the dark shifting shadows, words, petals glow
Peppering the night with soft lights
Pale yellow able to ignite
Porcelain skin, as marble set alight
Suprasternal notch worshiped delicately
Supreme rhythm of words and touch, unbearable intensity
Surrendering, mouth forms a perfect O, in synchronicity
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Sexy and beautifully written.
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Thank you dear pontificating friend. I haven’t told you that you were awesome for a while, well, I’m telling you now 😉
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😀
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Beautiful x
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Thank you! One word from you means a hell of a lot x
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It deserves more than one word, but beautiful will do 🙂 x
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Wow! I’m all tingly!! “In the dark shifting shadows, words, petals glow
Peppering the night with soft lights.” Love it!!! I had to look up “suprasternal notch” 😛
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Thank you Matt! Tingly is good! This was written in response to someone telling me not long ago that “sex is sex” and that an orgasm is not in any way, shape or form *better* if the person giving it to you reads and is generally smart, that the fact somebody can play with words makes no difference…I begged to differ as my own experience (laid out here for the world to read about) tells me that person is wrong. Very wrong.
And that comment is waaaay too long and should have been added at the end of the poem really 😛
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hahaha!! That’s what I like about you; you make sure the reader understands! And I disagree with whoever said that to you has well. There are levels to orgasms…and women have way more levels than men!!
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Thank you twin, happy to know we are in agreement again 😉
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I found out about Suprasternal notch when watching “The English patient”. I was really tickled to find out that’s what it’s called because it’s a definitive fav in the body part list…if I did have a list 😉
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Lovely and yes! Tingly (thanks Matt!) The drawing is a perfect foil for your words.
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Thank you Karin. Needless to say, I appreciate each and every comment, but I’m truly humbled when talented writers stop by and tell me they’ve enjoyed my writing…so thank you!
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Nathalie, you’ve made my day, thank you so much.
Wishing you a wonderful weekend. K~xx
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wow, imagery just exploding, brilliant
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Thank you so very much ❤
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I love it! Your blog is so deep and ethereal – it comes through beautifully. Ah-mazing 😊
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Thank you so much! What a wonderful thing to read straight after logging on to WordPress 🙂
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Your blog is great, I’m glad I stumbled upon you
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Thank you, and ditto!
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So picturesque and emotive. Beautiful to read
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Thank you so much, I’m so pleased you liked it as I quite like it myself 😉
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HAPPY WEEKEND 🙂
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Very well written, lyrical and sexy. I had to look up the term as well. Lovely
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Thank you so very much. A lot of people seem to have been unaware of that term, none of you have seen The English Patient obviously 😉
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I did see that movie of course, but it has been some time
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Right, my mistake 🙂
Then, I guess none of you are as obsessed with that body part as I am 😉
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Lol
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I hope you don’t mind but I nominated you for award! It is in my last post xxxxx
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You’re such a sweetheart! Thank you Natascha, so much! ❤
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Oh no problem! It made me happy to do it!
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Oh my gosh…I think I forgot to tell you that I also nominated you for the Sisterhood of the World Bloggers Award! I am so sorry! It is on my blog. ❤❤❤❤❤
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You’re too kind! And don’t feel bad, those pesky kids have robbed you of all your energy 😉
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So true hahaha! 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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great write 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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you are so much welcome 🙂
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Passionate prose indeed. :O)
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Thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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