She was, like,
yeah, I literally
died
So, wait,
I’m speaking to
a corpse?
she looked
at me
with vacant eyes
not getting
it
at all
yeah, she might
as well
be dead
total lack
of any kind
of depth
how can one
actually be
so vapid
with a vocabulary
that’s
rancid
seriously, I really
don’t give
a fuck
I’m never
going back to
Starbucks
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This was superb. Loved it.
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Yay! This comment has made me forget all about the insane insomnia plaguing me tonight 😉
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I suffer from that too. All too often.
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Oh, I’m sorry! It’s really awful, and the next day you get on with whatever you have to do and you feel like you’re stuffed with cotton wool or something – my commiserations my friend
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Nathalie, this is “literally” terrific! Love it!
Warm wishes,
Pepperanne
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Pepperanne, you are far too kind! Thank you though, I’m hoping people ‘get’ that it’s meant to be humorous, I’m not 100% sure that came across lol
I’m looking forward to “visiting” you later, when I get a break, and find out what you’ve been up to. I’m not lying when I say I’m *really* properly looking forward to it 🙂
Very warm wishes – Nathalie
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I assure you the humor was not lost on me. I thought it rather brilliant!
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I got my own issues and had to slap them again the other day but do appreciate and understand yours.
https://transitionu.wordpress.com/2015/07/12/coffee-and-a-90-second-sonnet-2/
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is she died, who would know?
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Exactly!
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sad
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Nice! Poetry made out of a pet peeve.
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Thank you 🙂
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did we meet the same person? lol
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We might have 😉
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Awesome!
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Thank you 🙂
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Great piece
Thank you for visiting
As always Sheldon
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Thank you 🙂
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You nailed it
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Yay! Thank you so much 🙂
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I should be Yaying you…. Yay
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I think we should just be Yaying each other 😉
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Oh yay
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