Caution

~ Purpleanais

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She erred on the side of caution – navigating the starless sky in stark conditions – between pools of dark emotions.

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18 thoughts on “Caution”

  4. Fabulous writing. So much said in so few words, creating some very powerful emotions and images. I think these types of short stories, or one-line stories are becoming some of my favorites. When done well they can be really thought provoking, which you definitely accomplished here in “Caution”. Wonderful, wonderful!

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    1. Thank you for a wonderful, wonderful comment. I never used to bother with 1 line or 6 word stories because I thought it was all a bit…lazy, I suppose. Then Twitter taught me (or rather, some talented people on Twitter taught me) that you can say quite a lot with just a few words. I’m probably not explaining it very well, but to cut a long story short, I’ve enjoyed the challenge of trying to come up with very short “stories”. However I have no merit with this one as it basically wrote itself 🙂

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      1. It’s a marvelous sort of self-challenge, I’m hoping that you post some more of these short stories. I find it interesting that you should mention, “basically wrote itself”. Just recently someone had shared with me that if it writes itself, it has a purpose. I’m looking forward to your next post!

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