Fabulous writing. So much said in so few words, creating some very powerful emotions and images. I think these types of short stories, or one-line stories are becoming some of my favorites. When done well they can be really thought provoking, which you definitely accomplished here in “Caution”. Wonderful, wonderful!
Thank you for a wonderful, wonderful comment. I never used to bother with 1 line or 6 word stories because I thought it was all a bit…lazy, I suppose. Then Twitter taught me (or rather, some talented people on Twitter taught me) that you can say quite a lot with just a few words. I’m probably not explaining it very well, but to cut a long story short, I’ve enjoyed the challenge of trying to come up with very short “stories”. However I have no merit with this one as it basically wrote itself ๐
Itโs a marvelous sort of self-challenge, Iโm hoping that you post some more of these short stories. I find it interesting that you should mention, โbasically wrote itselfโ. Just recently someone had shared with me that if it writes itself, it has a purpose. I’m looking forward to your next post!
https://onlyblackblog.wordpress.com/ ๐
Soul
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I just had a look, awesome! ๐
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Thank you so much for visiting and opinion you are welcome in my new visual.
My best regards.
Soul.
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Great pic too. ;)x
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Thank you ๐ x
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dangerous waters to navigate. . .
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Indeed, but life isn’t worth living if you keep to the known and safe paths…
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oh, i am the poster child for adventure
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Fabulous writing. So much said in so few words, creating some very powerful emotions and images. I think these types of short stories, or one-line stories are becoming some of my favorites. When done well they can be really thought provoking, which you definitely accomplished here in “Caution”. Wonderful, wonderful!
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Thank you for a wonderful, wonderful comment. I never used to bother with 1 line or 6 word stories because I thought it was all a bit…lazy, I suppose. Then Twitter taught me (or rather, some talented people on Twitter taught me) that you can say quite a lot with just a few words. I’m probably not explaining it very well, but to cut a long story short, I’ve enjoyed the challenge of trying to come up with very short “stories”. However I have no merit with this one as it basically wrote itself ๐
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Itโs a marvelous sort of self-challenge, Iโm hoping that you post some more of these short stories. I find it interesting that you should mention, โbasically wrote itselfโ. Just recently someone had shared with me that if it writes itself, it has a purpose. I’m looking forward to your next post!
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Brilliant ๐
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Pools of dark emotions
Just great
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Thank you Sheldon
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Intriguing for sure
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Thank you ๐
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Brilliant, it left me wanting more! So intriguing ๐
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