Alone
lost
in forests
of winter frost
& tortured tales
so many different paths
she may yet
take –
the indifferent stars
& magenta moon
will not help –
she tenses
frustrated
and exhales
clouds
of silvery sadness
*This is the result of a writing prompt on Twitter. I usually type my musings, but I was on a train and my phone pretty much dead, hence the scribbling with a pen – nice change*
First Image credit: veilaks.deviantart.com – second image: my own
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Most excellent bit of poetry Nathalie! I really liked this.
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Thank you Matt! I always like the ones that pretty much write themselves 😬
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Lovely piece!
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Thank you! I’m so pleased you liked it 🙂
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👍
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Very good, and you’ve excellent handwriting to boot. Mine looks like a chicken on crack stepped in ink and ran across a piece of paper.
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I noticed the writing too. Beautiful!
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I bet you’re exaggerating for comic effect! 😜😂
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Lovely but your handwriting is even lovelier! 👍👍👍👍
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Thank you Natascha! Apparently this kind of “leaning forward” writing means I have a strong personality and want to be noticed by the world 😂
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What a coincidence..mine leans too! 👍👍👍👍😙😙😙
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Hmm…us two are more alike than we thought! 😉
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You got it! 👏👏👏👏
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Lovely words!! I love the photo too. The horse made me feel so bereft. The girl looks beautiful and hopeful. Nicely done, Beauty ❤
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The horse made me feel bereft as well! As soon as I saw the horse, I was like, that’s the pic I need! I just wanted to reach out and stroke it 🙃
Thank you gorgeous! Have a lovely day 😘💜
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Beautiful, Nathalie 🙂
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Thank you Kelly! Have a lovely day 💜
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You as well! 🙂
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Lovely poem and handwriting…mine’s barely legible, I prefer typing. What was the prompt?
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Thank you! The prompt was just one word: “silvered”. I wrote this then tweaked it for Twitter so it would fit within the character limit. And I used “silvered sadness” originally, but really liked “silvery” so much better that I changed it for the blog 🙂
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The moon & stars are shunning me too. I love your handwriting – how unique it is! Sending hugs, chocolate, and lots of wine. The good stuff. Xx
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Thank you Elizabeth! That pesky full moon is always shunning me 😉 Chocolate, wine and hugs received gratefully…and the same is on its way to you 😉 xx💜
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Beautiful musing beneath a magenta moon. Love the fae in this, Nat. Stunning 🙂
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Ryan…I’m honoured! Thank you so much for the kind words, they’ve made my day 🙂
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So happy to hear it, Nat 🙂
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I bungled migration of my old domain to new blog domain. The old one is ruined too. So please follow my blog here -sharingtidbits.wordpress.com/ (or clicking my pic) thanks:)
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Thank you for letting me know Nitin! I’m now following the new site 🙂
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thanks 🙂
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Your work is always so vivid and powerful: “…indifferent stars and magenta moon.”
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Thank you so very much for such a lovely, lovely comment 🙂
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Winter frost and tourchured tales….ummmm…awesome
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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You have the most nicely and perfect handwriting I’ve ever seen.
Nathalie, two-thumbs way up on this poem. Excellent and beautifully felt poem. 🙂
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This is beautiful, your poems always make me *feel* something. Isn’t it nice to take a step away from typing sometimes? Your handwriting is just lovely too.
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Hello my friend
Thank you for stopping by and for the follow. I already follow you. It sounds like we are get it done people and can appreciate another opinion. The art in the above is magical, makes me think children day dreaming. I’m not sure why you followed me. I don’t write by Journalism standards even thou is was a life goal at one time. I have only written one poem as an adult. Reading poetry at WP has given me the itch.
See you soon at your place or mine.
🙂
M
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Beautiful. In few words, you capture many nuances of loneliness.
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Such a beautiful poem Nat and I love your handwriting with its slant and long swoops of cursive
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Graphology is a fascinating subject and I am a very easy specimen to analyse 😉
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And I will analyze you endlessly
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I meant my handwriting!!
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Can I write on you? Maybe in lipstick?
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