Chemistry

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You soothed this scarred warrior and removed my suit of armour.
The air full of static, in a state of unrest, I took off what was left: my dress –
wearing nothing underneath, revealing all ever so slowly, I found it hard to breathe – all the while, your eyes hypnotised, you stood and stared, paralysed.

The anticipation, exquisite. The waiting, excruciating.

You, winter moth mesmerised by my icy flame, broke the spell and we both fell — rough display morphed into a graceful ballet before switching back again.

We burnt, we slurred our words, drunk to the hilt on our chemistry, while around us all was dark, as the stars had gone into hiding, wishing to throw a veil over the unchaste proceedings.
Just in time, the rain came down, saving us and our surroundings from burning to the ground.

Image credit: Amarelle07 @deviantart.com

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36 thoughts on “Chemistry

    1. I’m glad you liked, Al. I went through writer’s doubt with that one. You know that thing when you go:
      It’s really good.
      It’s not too bad
      It’s barely okay
      Actually it’s shit.
      In the end, I cut out a couple of sentences that I thought were just, er…too much haha and thought I’d publish it anyway.

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    1. Oh, major exhalation of relief here. If you deem it okay, then it IS okay lol
      I really had doubts about this one, I was like, do I like it JUST because it’s such a personal experience and because it has actually just happened? So I didn’t know and now you guys have told me it’s fine, it’s fine haha
      Thanks, Vic. If anybody knows about hot writing, it’s you 😉

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      1. Omg, you’re the sweetest thing. Though, I’ve read plenty of heat from you. You can’t help it, that’s just who you are. You exude sensuality and I realize that sounds like a come on, lol, but it’s just the truth. 😊 I do know what you mean though- sometimes you’re thinking about something that happened and you’ve no idea if your words adequately conveyed the heat of it as it runs through your mind. You definitely conveyed that heat though. Very nicely! 😉

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      2. Haha it DOES sound like a come on, so did my previous comment to you now I think of it 😂
        Seriously though, YES! You’ve perfectly described it: “sometimes you’re thinking about something that happened and you’ve no idea if your words adequately conveyed the heat of it as it runs through your mind.”
        Thanks again, you lovely, hot girl 😉

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  1. The Picture in this fits and blends so well with your romantic poeticism.
    Beautifully well written.

    You express yourself in a tone of dark and light but bring in the flavor of all 2 elements into one. Excellent. 🙂

    P.S Don’t forget to check your email for our collaboration. 🙂

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  2. I always laugh because notice how the saucy ones always garner the most ‘likes’ ha ha ha! Our sex starved souls! 😉 You give a new meaning to haut!
    (I like it when you post little pieces of a story, they are tantilizing and it’s a really good idea and it works. Your prose has encouraged me to try it, and I ended up writing a really SICK FUCK of a book I may email it to you when you are less busy with all your studies, I don’t want to interupt those but I would like your opinion more than anyone elses as to whether it reveals me as a deviant or just a good french girl ;))

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