A garland of flowers
Petals tumbling down
Over her shoulders
Hair whipped by the wind
Skin tasting of salt
Found in distant shimmery seas
Eyes circled by dark rings
Green pools in which he drowns
Willingly
Unable to resist
Vivid cerise lips
The call of her hips
She tilts her head
He loses his
Dies a hundred deaths
In the madness of mislaid hours
The crest of wild waves
And divine dreamy languor
Very sexy!
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Thank you very much, Penny!
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Stunning!
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Thank you SO much, Richard. I almost fainted with joy on my computer chair π
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Me too when I read it, although I already had my feet up.
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LOL! Seriously though, it means a lot, a hundred thank you(s)! π
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My pleasure. π
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I liked this poem my friend. A amazing poem.
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Thank you! I’m so pleased you did π
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I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Thank you ever so much for the reblog π
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A amazing poem needed to be read by more people.
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Aww, thank you again!
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Simply BEAUTIFUL!π
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Aw, thank you so much! π
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FUCK YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YES!! This is worth EVERYTHING!!!!!!
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My God, Nathalieβ¦if you didnβt pull every fascinating detail from my brain for thisβ¦I would be surprised. If I didnβt know you wrote this I would believe I did. Holy crap, this is the essence of what lives in my heart every day.
Itβs like being in a foreign land and finding someone who speaks your native tongue. Itβs perfect and youβre amazing. π
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*faints*
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Nononononono!!!! Get up…you have to write more!! Lol! π
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I certainly shall or at the very least I will die trying! π
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For you to say *you* might have written it…is like the knight identifying with the poor peasant girl! I’m just delirious with joy right now. Omg, Eric…you have MADE my day!! ππ
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Well we are even bc you made mine too! Enjoy your day, My Lady. π and thank you again.
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Thank you again, Eric. You gave me a most awesome birthday gift a day early πππ
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Happy unbirthday. I’ll hit you with a real one tomorrow!!! ππ
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Dreamy and sexy! Love this Nat. And making Eric swear?!? Priceless!
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Thank you so much, Meg! I’m feeling pretty delirious right now (as you already know from my messed up texts π)
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Mmm. So so good!! I like “she tilts her head, he loses his” I love this whole thing! β€
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That’s my favourite line too π
Thank you, Vic…it seems there’s something in the air at the moment π
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Indeed it does. I love how WPers seem to feed off each other sometimes. There is a lot of good energy around right now.
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This is a masterpiece Nathalie. I have no way to relate to it adequately, but I see it as the finest oil painting, done by a Master, hanging in the most ornate and expensive gilded frame
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Superb.
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Thank you so much, my awesome friend!
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Heck yes girl! This is one sexy masterpiece!
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Thank you! π
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The last four lines made me want to mislay a few mad hours. π Loved it!
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Thank you so much, Diana π
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Sensually stunning and sexy at its best. π
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What a great compliment, thank you my friend π
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I am nominating you for a March madness award, just copy and paste this over 5 blogs if you like to participate. βIβm nominating you for Thatβs So Jacobβs March Blog Madness! Itβs simple: find five interesting blogs today, copy and paste this comment, and give them a follow! http://www.thatssojacob.wordpress.com. Have fun spreading the blog love this month!β
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: A Site of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Purpleanais/arwenaragornstar
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Thank you so much for the reblog! π
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Nathalie, this is a mesmerizing read! It’s as if from your words a hand reached into my soul. It gently squeezed and left me breathless. The visuals of wind blown hair and skin traced with sea salt brings me to ocean to witness you. Looking into your eyes, I see the ocean residing in pools of quiet fire…I begin to burn for you. Your lips and hips call to me as the ocean waves pound the shore. This same ocean swells within me as I ache for the release. I want to ride the crest of the nature’s wild beat…into you.π
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Michael, your comments are always epic but, hell…this is particularly amazing! “Skin traced with sea salt” is alone worth being included in a poem of its own! You’re bringing such delicious images and sensations to mind π
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You are so kind with these replies.βΊοΈYou are like a muse…or Grace. You put out these wonderfully stimulating pieces of art and you inspire meπΉ
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As long as I inspire you…and stimulate you…then I’m happy π
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L O V E β€οΈ π π π π
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So pleased you did, gorgeous! ππ
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Your words excel. I really like this poem.
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Thank you so much, lovely π
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Id be honoured if you’d check this out https://tanyatale.wordpress.com/2017/07/07/bridge-of-eternal-love/
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