I cut
I slice
In a blur
I cry
Life
With this knife
Enters
Me
As I bleed
And relive
The Passion of the Christ
In a tiny, tiny glass
A tempest
In E minor
Colours
Which have never been
So real
Because smoke
Charcoal
Dusky Red
And pain
Is all I know
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Wow. That’s gorgeous. Painfully gorgeous.
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I’m so glad you thought so – thank you!
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I agree with Mel
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Thank you, Sheldon!
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💔💕💔
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Fear not, lovely knight – those are not *my* feelings although they are my words 💜
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Even still they are powerful and evoke those emotions. But I am happy to know that they are not the current state of affairs. ❤
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😘
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How many beautiful colors 🙂
Cheers
Soul.
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Thank you, my lovely Italian friend 💜
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Thank you for your friendship! 💜
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😘 🇮🇹
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“A tempest in e minor”. Of course the first thing that *I* had read was ‘Temptress in E minor’, which would be a magnificent title for that beautiful photo. Your words transform the temptress to the poetess, that one can only admire the way beauty is extracted from pain with your prose. ❤
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Temptress in E minor really is a good title, isn’t it?! Hmm…must ponder.
Thank you, Rob – an afternoon smile was extracted from your comment 😉
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Em is such a sultry key. I think that you should write something! While written in Am, I think that dropping this song to Em would be just as enticing:
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I may, I may 😉
Great link btw!
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I’ll be looking forward to it. I’m glad that you liked the song. 🙂
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I’ve always liked that song – and for some reason, I keep forgetting you’re a musician!
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Raw. Powerful, and utterly superb.
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Thank you so much, awesome pontificator
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A great line here:
“A tempest
In E minor
Colours
Which have never been”
All the colors bring forth a reflective therapy on life and the self.
Incredible writing Nat. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Charlie!
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Beautiful. X
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Thank you, lovely! x
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I read this much earlier today. It still lingers.
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I’m glad, it wasn’t about clever wordplay but about conveying something quite powerful (it was meant to, anyway)
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Smiles. It does.
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Awesome Nathalie. Awesome.
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Thank you ever so much, Alan. It pleases me no end when I’ve written something you enjoy 🙂
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You’re more than welcome Nathalie.
I love reading all your work. 😎
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You’re always so nice – I really appreciate it 😊
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Wow this is definitely a favorite it’s explicitly passionate and viseral and gored with visuals, definitely one of your best really love this! Wow! Kudos you clever thing.
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Want to lower myself to the ground and mumble: “I’m not worthy”
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Will you be wearing The Boots when you do? 😉 (cheap i know but i had to!) Seriously though, SO fucking worthy!
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I’m now fucking smiling like a fucking loon in my fucking house
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Ah gorgeous being, today was full of sun I knew it was your smile♡
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The smile that was just for you 💜
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Cut’s to the bone, well done.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Jeez, your words drip pain (and I mean this as a sincere compliment)!
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Thank you! I’m taking it as a compliment because that was the idea
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👍oh yes, indeed 😊
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Beautiful photo and amazing words dear Poet.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Your words reveal truths that your picture defies!
Well done!
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Ah, you’re too kind!
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